ext. street -night
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It is raining and Jerry is walking along the streets. You can tell it's L.A. He hears a scream and curiously follows it.
guy
You can't do this!
Girl
John, let me go!
john
No, you can't do this, you can't do this, I can't lose you, Ashley.
Jerry backs up against a building and looks around the corner. There is a bigger guy holding a smaller girl. He gets a look of recognition on his face. It goes strangely silent.
ashley
You blew it, John. We don't have a chance.
john
No!
Ashley screams and Jerry immediately jumps into action and rounds the corner.
john
Who's this?
ASHLEY
I don't know.
That look of recognition turns into shock onto Jerry's face.
john
Yes, you do. Who is he?
Ashley
I swear, I swear, I don't know.
JOHN
Yes, yo-
jerry
No, she doesn't. Is anything going on here?
john
Go away, you don't need to get into this.
JERRY
Well, it sounds like I do. Let her go, man.
john
Go away! I'm warning you.
ashley
Go, go, now.
jerry
Okay, I'll go.
Jerry turns away from the alley and gets out and then leans against the side of the building. Instead of hearing talking a scream from Ashley can be heard again. Jerry turns around in the alley and sees John with his fist in the air, he's holding onto her arm.
jerry
Let her go now!
john
Or what, what will you do?
jerry
Just let her go, John.
John pulls a gun from his side and points it at Jerry.
John
I warned you.
Jerry jumps out of the way and John shoots a bullet. It hits the building behind Jerry. Jerry runs forwards and jumps out of the way of another bullet. John shoves Ashley against the wall hard. Jerry takes that moment and tackles John, takes the gun from him, steps in between John and Ashley and points it at John.He picks up a cellphone and dials 911.
fade out
It's not tabbed correctly when copied and pasted. But I'm so far in love with it and have some amazing ideas!
I'll have a new scene tomorrow.
Until next time,
-Jackson
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